by Symbiotcsex
Enjoyed reading, but would like to hear more about what happens next. There are tons of different directions you could take this story, but instead it just ends with no resolution at all.
A very short intro into what could be an interesting story. Would be curious to see where you take this, though I agree this isn't mind-control.
I know it's unlikely, given how old this is, but could you please continue the story? I'm interested to see how this plays out.
I am currently working on another chapter for this one, but I am also devoting more effort to the other story I've posted here. Chapter three of that one also has a mind control element, if that's also your interest.