All Comments on 'Sex in the Woods'

No, it's not overly ambitious or spectacular, just a good read. Good luck in the contest!

You're story has been mentioned on the review thread, found in the Author's Hangout forum on Lit's bulletin board. ~ Thanks, Red

Your narative style is good, you use words well, try think of a diferent sort of ending.

College students meet as Cowgirl and Cowboy at a Halloween fest. A walk in the woods, turns out to be a walk on the wild side. Terrific Read!

Your characters were very believable. Great Job! Very Hot Story!

You have a gift for writing detailed descriptions that are actually fun to read. Tastes, scents...things that I don't normally about in erotica. Also, the build-up has just enough humor to keep things interesting without becoming too corny. When the sex scene finally happens, it's raw and brutal. This is a very memorable story.