All Comments on 'Shadow Tales: First Punishment'

Great story. This style particularly appeals to me. :)

I'd also give 2 thumbs up... but my hands are busy right now. The pace and content of this story really got me going, without any of the usual distractions like errors in spelling, grammar, or word usage. I look forward to reading more of your stories, particularly in this series.

I'd also give 2 thumbs up... but my hands are busy right now. The pace and content of this story really got me going, without any of the usual distractions like errors in spelling, grammar, or word usage. I look forward to reading more of your stories, particularly in this series.

Pretty good; I always liked the student/teacher thing. But the name takes itself a little too seriously, I'd like more dirty-talk, and first person has and always will annoy me.

I love your first encounter! It made me drip juices. I wish I were lucky enough to be your slave!