All Comments on 'Shaping Michelle'

Michelle was written and sung by McCartney, not Lennon.

Yes! Thank you for such a hot story! Very nicely written too. I hope to read more of your stories in the future. All the best

Lucky guy, tell us more about the next dinne!

Thanks for the kind feedback, all. This is my first story and really my first attempt at any sort of creative writing. I look forward to bringing you all some more steamy tales of Michelle and whatever else I come up with. And mea culpa in re attributing the song to Lennon!

Hot story. BTW, Kind of Blue was a Miles Davis album. John Coltrane did play on the album.

Man I need to do some quick Googling next time I refer to any music in my stories!

What do you think makes Michelle a slut? Women acknowledging and exploring their sexuality isn't slutty. She wasn't promiscuous. She didn't have much experience with guys at all. She spent time considering what she wanted her first time to be like and with who. The guy, on the other hand, has had a lot of sexual experience. He had sex with Michelle simply because she made her body available. If anyone in this story is a slut, it's the guy.

Exceptionally well written for a first effort, congratulations. I would have guessed you were an English teacher rather than History.