All Comments on 'She'll Never Know'

It was gorgeous to read- one of

my favourite fantasies.

This was really well written.

very good story very well written

Very well written, with a nice build up and realistic development as Chris betrays his friends. Writing it in second person is a clever move as it makes we, the reader, complicit in his crime. A short, compact and erotic piece. Recommended.

Fantastic story! Well done :)

Great story! Would love to read some more!!!!!