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Nice work, dude. Gave me chills!

JJ

Now I'm scared to get my coffee. You are a bastard albeit a good writer. One small quibble - you should have had homeless narrator typing story to us from public library scince he probobly doesn't own puter'. Other then that thanks for quality shiver of fear.

I just plain love your stories Mr Appleby!

you skeery bugger :D

loved it. *shivers*

*shudder* Perfect for Halloween! x

I won't look at halloween the same way again :( - lol

creepy one indeed GA - gives me the chills

G.A., your skills range far beyond mere erotica.

Would that I could see your name in a bookstore somewhere.

Bloody hells, GA, my heart was pounding.

You revealed enough to scare the living hells out of me... the hint, the tease, the absolutely grotesque without being graphic. Pure nerve, leaving it to our imagination.. The next time, I'll wait until April 30th when I decide to read something scary from you again.

hmmm maybe that's not the best place to hide..

Great Job!! Scary Story!

You have guts posting this kind of story here. I applaud it. It was slick.

5 stars.