by JourneyLover
We all know what has happened so let's hear the details and find out where it leads.
My wife and I loved your story. It made her very wet and very talkitive. Thanks
These two have some real issues to talk about before going further. They could be at a very big cross road in a changed relationship. Ignoring what is going through the wife’s mind and his can only lead to problems real or imagined
Good writing interesting story
Okay, since your writing made me as hard as a bar of steel, I can't give you anything less that 100. Loved it!
I definitely liked the story and the way they ran through the fantasy. It was definitely very hot. The only criticism I can think of is some of the paragraphs were a little long and could be broken up. Other than that I can't wait to see what happens next. Never mind the people that say they need to talk and might have issues.
I couldn't help but feel the doubt and shock his wife's comments made while he was doggy-styling. Where is this leading. Is this a cheating wife story or just her fantasy? I loved the conflict you created. I would like to see where "Shot of Brandy" goes.