All Comments on 'Shot of Brandy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Congrats!

Great story -- can't wait to see where things go from here!

fquicksrfquicksrabout 18 years ago
Good Start

We all know what has happened so let's hear the details and find out where it leads.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More please

My wife and I loved your story. It made her very wet and very talkitive. Thanks

peggytwittypeggytwittyabout 18 years ago
Very good writing

These two have some real issues to talk about before going further. They could be at a very big cross road in a changed relationship. Ignoring what is going through the wife’s mind and his can only lead to problems real or imagined

Good writing interesting story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Yum!

Okay, since your writing made me as hard as a bar of steel, I can't give you anything less that 100. Loved it!

gizzmo301gizzmo301about 18 years ago
good

I am waiting for the next part to see where you go with this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice Story

I definitely liked the story and the way they ran through the fantasy. It was definitely very hot. The only criticism I can think of is some of the paragraphs were a little long and could be broken up. Other than that I can't wait to see what happens next. Never mind the people that say they need to talk and might have issues.

stevespestevespeabout 18 years ago
Hmm where's his head at now?

I couldn't help but feel the doubt and shock his wife's comments made while he was doggy-styling. Where is this leading. Is this a cheating wife story or just her fantasy? I loved the conflict you created. I would like to see where "Shot of Brandy" goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

There's is the guilty feeling but I would like to try it with my wife

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