by JourneyLover
I couldn't help but feel the doubt and shock his wife's comments made while he was doggy-styling. Where is this leading. Is this a cheating wife story or just her fantasy? I loved the conflict you created. I would like to see where "Shot of Brandy" goes.
I definitely liked the story and the way they ran through the fantasy. It was definitely very hot. The only criticism I can think of is some of the paragraphs were a little long and could be broken up. Other than that I can't wait to see what happens next. Never mind the people that say they need to talk and might have issues.
Okay, since your writing made me as hard as a bar of steel, I can't give you anything less that 100. Loved it!
These two have some real issues to talk about before going further. They could be at a very big cross road in a changed relationship. Ignoring what is going through the wife’s mind and his can only lead to problems real or imagined
Good writing interesting story
My wife and I loved your story. It made her very wet and very talkitive. Thanks
We all know what has happened so let's hear the details and find out where it leads.