by Karyn Gardenia
Some stories deserve more than a "5." This was one. It had a deslciously sexy plot and well-developed characters. One of the best I've read here in a long time. Well-done!
I have dreamed of this happening to me many times.
You are truly one of the best writers on this site. Your command of words that create the perfect pictures make all one's senses come alive. I can feel myself in your stories and especially love that subtle "control" theme that you work into your writing. Keep writing!!