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Click hereMost of the little pups were shocked and Giani jumped up. "You's going to steal our Mari. I hate you." She started crying and ran to the house leaving everyone else shocked. Her two minions looked shocked as well and hurried after her.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agoPlease,continue this past chapter three. I just found it and I love it.
barmaid10over 10 years agoOf course you don't have the courage to use your name to tear down someone else's hard work. That's very cowardly. The male characters DO NOT display pedophile tendencies. Instead, they show a warmth and loving generosity of spirit that is a wonderful model for the kits/pups. This chapter is about healing the wounds of the past and breaking up some of the scar tissue. What a wonderful, heart-warming read! Shame on you for vilifiling it!
maxd01over 10 years agoAuthorThe one part of this story that was very hard for me to write yet so integral was the very last part where Gianni realizes Mari is going to leave. Not only did I actually cry but I snickered my ass off. It was just such the perfect line and fits the little girl almost perfectly. I figure that while writing if I am starting to get teary eyed then I must be doing something correctly.
I think in the future I am going to put these little snippets in about my favorite scenes or lines. I think I got this urge from watching the Avengers and snickering over some of the lines. I can just see Joss Whedon rolling on the floor as he was working on it.
Ww_Owover 10 years agoI have 2 wolfdogs and have been around wolfdogs and wolves for most of my life and yes the cold nose in the stomach (or armpit) is a rather common occurrence as a wake up call. My boy is 12 years old and I have had that wolfdog (hes about 10% husky and the rest is wolf from a stabilized line going back to the 70's) and he still does this. He seems to think its funny. As to the people who think Dan comes off effeminate dont sweat them. Plenty of guys hug and such,in fact its a common occurance in some countries and regions (like oh most of europe). Personally I know plenty of guys that have done renfaire for years that greet like such and many of these guys are built like linebackers,have girlfriends or wives and they all do actual sword combat or re-enactment combat with steel swords. People in this day and age forget that those are old traditions.
NymphWriterover 10 years agoI felt so bad for her as she doesn't understand yet why Mari is leaving. I hope you address this in the next chapter. Otherwise I love this story and I'm looking forward to seeing Mari healed and falling deeper in love with Geoff. She deserves some happiness and once Giani understands that he's not stealing her... he's healing her.
