All Comments on 'Siren of Love Ch. 05'

I'm hooked on this tale.. keep going i cant wait for next chapter..

You're mythology is screwed. Poseidon is Apollo and Ares's uncle, not their brother. And second, if Lyra really was leaving she wouldn't tell them where or his long or the reasons why. That's just plain stupid. Third: falling in love with a nymph? Seriously? Do I have to explain the stupidity behind that? They wouldn't be able to be enthralled by her music: mermaids are children of Poseidon. A mermaid-nymph or 'siren' as you call her would be a subject to Poseidon. And Apollo is a hothead who guides the 'sun chariot's across the sky, o why would he be on earth with his uncle and having sex with a nymph who is a total idiot?

People take things too seriously......It's a story and a good one..Keep up the great writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!