All Comments on 'Sister Golden Hair Delight Ch. 21'
by calibeachgirl
- 5 Comments
Phxray54over 13 years agoGood character development for B & S with enough tension to move the story and characters. The "thought comment" about Bob wanting to upgrade the path very subtle and an oh so very human thing to do. Many writers would over look something so simple but that makes the character so much more human and believable. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for your work.
Anonymousover 13 years agokeep up the awesome work. You are an amazing writer and look forward to reading more of your writings in the future
RHinSCover 13 years agoGood story telling. You should post the ride story under non erotic.
Anonymousover 13 years agoThe characters are are engaging (throughout the series!) and the writing is wonderful! It is so good to find someone who can spell and craft a smooth sentence!
caramelcreamover 13 years agoJust a minor detail... if Misaki had Sayomi at the age of 19, and Sayomi is 35, that would make Misaki 54--not 48, I believe... Otherwise, a great story!
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