All Comments on 'Slave Wife'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Poorly written

with many errors. Badly needs editing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Interesting

Interesting story, with a twist ending that's only slightly predictable.

tiamat3xtiamat3xover 12 years ago
To short

The story was too short and could have used some sex along with the blow jobs. The idea was good just needs a little more work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
seaman?

seaman? really?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Funny!

"He had a big heart on..."

Do you even read what you write?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
HIGH PRICED CALL GIRL WHO DID IT FOR FREE

Derrick had a big heart on

their wived giving them head

Aftr dinner

Elaine looked at the seaman stained carpet

high priced call girl who did it fro free

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