All Comments on 'Small Party at Bora Bora'

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jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Total waste

What a waste of reading time. Stories should be clearly defined with distinguished characters, not a confusing mess of a puzzle. While you are trying to impress with your witticisms and prose you have destroyed your storyline.

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