All Comments on 'Smoke Gets in My Eyes'

A few typo's but not distracting from the piece. Fives all the way

i hope that you are planning on writing more of this story. what a powerful way you have of drawing the reader in. loved it, please write more.

I'm not one for long comments, but you nailed it with this one.

I had a girlfriend, a major smoker, does something similar to me. I didn't smoke and sometimes would comment negatively about her smoking. Her way of dealing with this was to get me horny as hell and, in that state, blow her smoke into my mouth and sometimes I was sort of forced to inhale it. Looking back at it all I realize that she was trying to get me used to the smoke. Eventually it worked as I became very addicted after several months of this.

I've tried to stop but can't.