All Comments on 'Smokin Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not worthy of a comment.

Garbage

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Looks

like the fags and cucks are out in force for todays offering . 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Once a slut

always a slut.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
conflicted comment.

So he reads dirty stories, likes porn, but hates sluts.

Lets hope that this sad "fellow" eventually gets over his wife's infidelity.

It must have really hurt, if he is taking it out on fictional characters, on the internet...It cheers me up to know that this pisses him off.

I wonder if he just hates all women, or maybe they are all sluts to him.

Once a narrow minded misogynist, always a misanthropist.

The story was good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
1 star

conflicted comment.

So it reads cuckold wimp asshole dirty stories, likes porn, but loves sluts and whores and skanks.

Lets hope that this sad "fellow" eventually gets over it's wifes betrayal and infidelity and her cuckoldry of it.

It must have really hurt, if it is taking it out on other readers and loves cuckold fictional characters and stories, on the internet...It cheers it up to know that this pisses real men off. It is not a man but acrossdressing freak that is why it is no longer getting fucked by women only animals and plastic dolls.

I wonder if it just loves all plastic women and animals, or maybe they are all real whores and sluts to it..

Once a cuckold wimp sissy it, always a cuckold wimp sissy it that fucks animals and plastic dolls.

The story was shit. Only this Anon 'IT' liked it. It got off on the idea of what it used to be.

RealDocRealDocover 13 years ago
WRONG GENRE

Should be in "Lesbian". Please let us know next time so we can skip it and save time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Smokin

Though probably mis-labeled, was the beginning of a good story. Will be looking for smokin Part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Chapter 2

'PLEASE'

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep Your Story Rolling

I see the low score on your first chapter and disagree with it. Though she became bi-curious a little too easily I think a young married woman waking up in an unknown room would initially want to know what time it was to be home when husband came in. Keep writing and lets see where your imagination takes this story now.

RUSTYSKINSRUSTYSKINSabout 12 years ago
Potential for a good story...

I like the story idea, A good sexy, sweet, hard lust lesbian sex. Keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
yikes

Hot wife must mean whore.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Dope

Whore wife smokes weed. That's different.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

good definately more to cum

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