All Comments on 'Snap Shot'

Amazingly written. I loved it.

I would love to see the snap shot that obviously has made such an impact.

yes, truly the best story I have read on Literotica. erotic and gentle at the same time. for your sake, i hope that it was non-fiction.

This is the kind of story that makes me seriously consider erotica as a form of art. The dreamlike state of beauty and intimacy you've crafted here is unmatched by any other story on this site. Bravo.

It was artsy and classic, one that the reader will keep on thinking, what if I was there? can you publish the snapshot? you are a great writer!

No other way to describe my reaction to this beautifully sensual tale... Wow!

... this story has struck me. I have no better way of describing it. Thank you, Mad Mike.

So well written, I feel as if it were a memory of my own.

This story is amazing. It's beautiful and not predictable because it gripes you so closely in each moment. I roll my eyes at sappy romantic stories and have mild interest in hardcore stuff but this was something more. You two were so young, so excited. And it was a real STORY that you could sink your teeth into. It gave me so many vivid sensations! I thoroughly enjoyed the experience of reading it. I will remember this story fondly, and by showing such sweet depth of intimacy it has already affected my sex life. That's how good it is! Get an editor and a publisher.

Also, imagine how beautiful and peaceful and passionate this world would be is everyone was made love to like this and knew how to make love like this. Such a profoundly personal experience that melts stress, thoughts, sadness, leaving you whole and loved and loving.

This is a fantastic story, I'm happy that you decided to share it with the world. I would love to see the shot, if you are willing to still send it out. My e-mail is HelixPhoenix79@gmail.com

i just have to see the picture that goes with this story bdunn91@gmail.com

An alluring and enticing story! A true testament to how relations should be nourished.

Photos? By all means I want to see the inspiration: charles@cartersr.com

Fantastic story that vividly transports the reader back in time to a highly sensual and evocative setting!

Well written in a style that captures the mood, ambience and experience as a whole.

Two thumbs up!

Would be honored to receive the picture.

Please send to harryflashman@live.com

Kind Regards

this is a brilliant little story. very well written it really took me in.

keep it up.

So much sensuality,desire,animal lust, and trust involved. So much emphasis today on porn shots and girlie magazines, when the written word tells the story of the artistic photos. Absolutely the best written, well crafted story of the bygone era of my generation, when these feelings were so real and vibrant. The story had me mesmerized the whole time, beginning to end, most of the time holding my breath. I could feel Jim's feelings so real, feel the heat, taste the excitement. BRAVO! The best ever on Literotica!

I am shaking, there is almost too much passion in this story. Superb writing.

this is the first story i've read in the whole of this site that actualy gave me goose bumps. I fealt like I was there in 1965. Hats off, simply a devistating story.

I too read the whole story and was moved by the story itself, the author has real talent to bring scenes to life in an intensely evocative way- they should be selling books, not writing on here for free!

Sweet, affectionate, and a little uncertain - whether that moment actually happened or not, you nailed it.

Would surely love to c a snap of her!!!

Masterfully written. Thank you.

You really caught the moment and the adrenalin rush.

that was beautifully written! if you still send it, please send it to olemiss1000@hotmail.com

Well written very erotic and at the same time very sweet. Thanks and I would love to see that photo. jps.ipad@gmail.com

If it isn't a hassle I would love to see that photograph. That was possibly the best erotic story I have read. Well done. My email is lorddc@live.com

great story! please send the picture thebad98@hotmail.com

Seperationnation@gmail.com

I really like this story, though - in a way - I consider the end to be a little sad. It reminds me somehow, of how short and fragile life is.

I do however really like how you managed to intertwine erotic images with a sense of artistic beauty filled with emotions.

I'd love to see the picture that inspired you to write this piece. I'd very much appreciate it, if you could send it to me. Thank you. sadaeus@hotmail.com

Very nicely written! Would like to see the photo if you still send it? somefungi@yahoo.com

A masterpiece on literotica. Please send the shot of sexy Cynthia to colourtheory01@gmail.com

wow would love to see the photo

Heffie01@yahoo.co.uk

This was an exceptional story! Your words paint such a vivid picture, I could not heop but feel I was there in the room watching the scene unfold, felling the emotions from both of you. Thank you so much for sharing.

I'm not going to say this is the best story I've ever read (although it is), because any words, even those, are hopelessly trite compared to the beauty you have woven here. Thank you.

A beautifully written episode. Well done, Sir!

A very fine, well-crafted story that has an abundance of merit aside from the erotic elements.

You should be warmly congratulated for the hours spent creating and refining this piece.

As a keen photographer myself I'm very envious of your protagonist. Should the final mention of the photo be true indeed, then please could you send the photo to gorgeousity@gmail.com.

Many thanks.

Really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing this! I would love to see the pic as well. Please send to keithstarblazer@hotmail.com. Thanks again!

I loved your story! I'd love to see the photograph. My email is margotelise@gmail.com

I come back again and again to read this story. It's a joy to read every time. And yes, I'd love to see the photo! dtait231@aol.com

that was a great story. Could you send the photo to superduperfakes@aol.com

Really good story... please sen the pictures to my eamail yappavrin@hotmail.com

It's great to hear a very believable and erotic story from someone who actually knows the technical details of what they're doing. I have photographed nude models on many occasions, and although it never quite worked out quite like in this story, I must admit to falling a little bit in love with each one of them. Great story ;)

Great story, loved the work put into it. Could you send me a copy of the photograph? anonymus13561@aol.com

Could you send me a copy of the photo to Sean_92_alpha@hotmail.com? Thanks

Awesome story man could you please send me the pic dunritos1@gmail.com

I really enjoyed your story. Please send the pic if you will. penmate101@aol.com

Brought back memories of some 37 yrs. ago with Sharon. I would love to see thee pic. wolverinecon@yahoo.com. Thanks

best story on here great stuff we want more

realky erotic would love to see the pic to macth with the one in my mind dronkbackup@gmail.com

I was touched by your story and now have a renewed interest in picking up a camera. Thank you so much! You're a fantastic writer as well as I'm sure, photographer.

I'd love to see the picture as well, though I have a pretty real idea of what Cynthia looked like in my head already. charlierbrts55@gmail.com.

Thanks.

plz send to recoversrvr@yahoo.com

I dont know how you came up with such an incredible piece of writing. Truly captivating.

please send to

chucklingcharlie@live.com.au

i read this story through 3 interruptions throughout the day couldnt wait to get back to it.

please send to patrick33569@yahoo.com

I love good stories and this is a great one. I connected with every bit and would like to read much, much more. If there is a picture I would like to enjoy it at jleoa@juno.co

I've never found a story on Literotica so touching and erotic at the same time. This really is a terrific piece. I'm sincerely impressed and for a pervy guy, that's a feat.

great story..well done...please send to bockey40@hotmail.com

The best sex story I have ever read...I wouln't call it porn...send it to playboy.

Very very well written.....good use of vocabulary too! :)

Excellent story, very well written, both touching and erotic.

Wonderful story, is this story written from actual experience?

please send it to jumbayardley@gmail.com

well written. I felt as if I was living the memory as it happened. Thank you.

Very well done, tasteful and erotic. Let the images be in the minds of the readers and don't send the picture, the face won't match the one in mind.

This is what defines the difference between erotica and porn. The love and respect shines through after all these years, I wish that I had written it but I know that I lack the sheer talent,,,,,,,

please send the picture to bakedlovespuds@gmail.com

i would love to see that pic.

mtn1111@yahoo.com

sure i would love to see. yamihere31@gmail.com

I would like to see it littleben1996@hotmail.com

Send that pic to vijay.g090@gmail.com

..... You really know how to write. You have described your wonderful life moment in great vivd detail.Thank you for telling your story. I enjoyed ready this amazing story. ( and this girl sounds fantastic, a real kind/polite/sweetheart, i would love to find a girl like that, that has the same demeanor in which you presented Cynthia with possessing).

..... Also, I would ask for the picture but i'm paranoid about strangers sending a virus to me. But i do have good virus protection so i might come back here pretty soon and request this photograph.

..... (hey,.. umm.. wait a sec, didn't you promise Cynthia that you would not show any one the photos. LOL, JK. Im sure its fine. Its been over 40 years).

..... Thank you again for writing this, and congratulations for having a wondering sensual and sexual moment that you can cherish forever.

..... Please write more stories, i would like to read more of your work.

send pic to knibb03@gmail.com please.

Pilotsmallz@gmail.com please! that was beautiful. The world needs more authors like you my friend

Send that pic to hpablo04@gmail.com pls

could you send the picture to kkrrmm3000@gmail.com ?

Cjohnson_2000@hotmail.com please :)

livrle2sk8@gmail.com

wow. simply amazing

freakingbob@hotmail.com

please =)

quad_racing_2006@hotmail.com im always open to some reality stuff. True stories just have that wild vision. Pease send that pic. Thanks

This was a beautiful sensual and erotic story. I loved every second of it. I would also love to see the picture. I like to collect beautiful pictures of every variety and that picture would be a wonderful addition to my collection.

My e-mail address is shadowriderlost@hotmail.com

amazing story,, curious if i can see it too, the story really hit home, ive got a girl next door im just wild about, and now this is how ive been thinking about her. convertible_kid@hotmail.com pls and thnaks

Great story! I enjoyed it. Touching. Can you send picture to heyitslizzie@hotmail.com?

thanks!

loved your story please send me a picture to kcampb1934@aol.com

ya i want to see it plz mail me at divya.gujral9@gmail.com

It really hit me at the end. this was a wonderful story, and also curious about the photo. please send it to me at xcrusaderx101@yahoo.com

I loved this story, extremely well paced!

i really wanna see the pic, lauracrinson@yahoo.com

great story, enjoyed reading it:D

p.s. send picture if u can on Geostigma4515@yahoo.com

The story a true work of art. I would love to see the pic. Email is soprano505@yahoo.com Title it Snap Shot.

P.S. Literotica should put some stories with the option of putting a picture with the story. _R

Thanks for this incredible erotic story, I would love to see the snap shot, if yo can pls send the pic to cabertooth_88@rediffmail.com, Thanks..

Excellent story, 1 of the best i have read. It ended all too soon. Would love to see the pic of cynth. Please send it to holdengts_300@hotmail.com. Many thanks

One of the most sensual and erotic stories I have ever read

Reading this story brought my memories of my not the first time but the first real time back. Such a beautifully written story. I could feel every emotion and desire. I am not sure if I want to see the snapshot, as I already have it in my mind, so vivid and beautiful. On the other hand curiosity is a bitch. Can you send the snapshot to boriskara@hotmail.com?

that was amazing. i would love to see the photo send it to theshit3748@yahoo.com

That is an incredible story! To think that you remembered such detail astounds me. I was greatly touched by this account and hope that I can have an experience as memorable and exciting as this.

Though our story wasn't like this, this story reminds me of the first time my husband and I had sex (we were high school sweethearts). I am really glad I went to this portion of the website - brought back memories!

It was fine until you had the montage. Then it fell apart. Still, the rest of it had actual character development unlike a lot of the stories that are posted here.

The story was fantastic! In this world of disgusting, vulgar, obscene stories, this story is pure beauty. Could you send me the picture at jaiig@hotmail.com please?

Thank you for this story. I have been a fan of literotica for some time and can truly say your story was captivating. If the photograph is as engrossing as the story, then I can truly say I have been served dinner and dessert. please respond to kellyj3ray@yahoo.com

As someone who enjoys/ed taking photos of women but is no longer in a position to do so I wanted t thank you for bringing back so many happy memories to me.

Not of your muse, nor even of sex, but of the feel of cameras, the expectant wait to see the shots, and the fascination with a beautiful woman.

steven jones 740 @ hotmail.co.uk

I would be pleased to see that photo! Thank you.

Great story! You made me feel your passion - not just your passion for Cynthia, but your passion for photography too. And the narrative drew me in - it wasn't like watching the story unfold as a third party. It was being the narrator.

Thanks for the story.

I agree so much with previous comments, about how this website is filled stories that pale in comparison to this. I was captivated by how well this story read, how naturally it flowed. I would very much appreciate seeing the picture, if you would consent to send it to me at; Disturbed_rawk@hotmail.co.uk. Thank you.

I cannot believe the detail you used to describe every little thing in that story. it is obvious that you have both an extremely vivid memory of this event and unrivaled talent at painting that pictue with words for others to share as vividly as you see it. After reading a story like that and experiencing that special time with you, I have to ask if you would be willing to share your prized photo with me, but understand if you have received too many requests at this point. Either way, thank you for the memories and I hope that whatever you do you continue writing because you obviously have an unparallelled gift. Erjams@gmail.com