All Comments on 'Snap Shot'

Yes, I want to see Cynthia.

Wow, that was GREAT!

I was mesmerized, draw in with great visuals from your story.

This is the best story on Literotica.

I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Thank You,

Brad L.

GREAT STORY

I would like to see snap shot of cynthia

Such a well written story. I think the best I've ever read on this website. I don't want to see the snapshot you have, your story tells it all well enough that I can see the snapshot in my mind. Thank-you...

What a delightful story, fresh and innocent. Thankyou for posting it - I've enjoyed being there... And yes, I'd love to see any pix you have to celebrate a joyous union. Pity it didn't become something life long.

Yes i would also like to see the picture you saved of her.

There is something to say about being young and "somewhat innoceent" ty for sharing a wonderful story.

I think that this is the most well-written story on here. 5 stars.

If this story isn't true, it should be!

as has already been said, one of the best stories on here, is it true?

One of the best stories I've ever read if not the best!And I confess it brought tears in my eyes in the end!

brill writing. Thanks.

Thank you for this and I somehow know this is a true story. First Love Never Dies. Now I am going to find my childhood sweetheart from over 40 years ago. I think I know where she is and I believe recently widowed. She was also the very best and three years older. Thanks again for a great story as it's the best I've read. My mother blew up this relationship as I wanted to marry her.

Let me reiteraght.....never take photos of girls when not awere!!!!!!!!!!! IT ONLY COMES BACKstop hawnt you later on DoWN THE TRAKS.APART from that your storie was a good one to read from start to Finnish.

Too sad at the end there but in liffe you can't get everything you want.people will still read nontheless.

You writhing style is to shelf especially for newcomers to the site and also those in search of stiffness.

Piece out Gfunk.

One of the best stories i have every read.

One of the best stories I honestly have ever read!

I was extremely impressed by your story. Great writing, awesome plot...

Aloha from Hawaii

GlennO

P.S. I tried sending you an independent comment, (i.e.--non-public) to request a photo, but the system wouldn't accept it.

Honestly the most poetic and sensual stories I've ever read

Would love a copy of your Cynthia snap shot

ReservedProf@yahoo.com

I really loved this story, i think its one of the best on literotica. Send me the snap of Cynthia plz😋! tototherain@gmail.com

Thanks for such a well written and sensual piece. Truly the stuff dreams are made of.

If you'd care to help me visualise the day by showing the surviving pic, I'd be most thankful. My email is bigjohnbrown90210@hotmail.com .

Thanks in advance and thanks again for the story.

konght1@aol.com.

Would love to see the picture.

Btw, do you have a agency of your own now or are you for hire?

I've been using Literotica for several years now, and this is hands-down my favorite story. You are a very gifted writer, and I would love to see more work from you.

By far the best story I have read on here so far, you have a real talent.

Would love to see the visual of this story. gregwallace592@yahoo.com

What an amazing story!!!! I love the build up and just the idea of the whole thing! Would love if you sent me the picture that goes along with te story! My email is andyleech24@yahoo.com

Very nice story. Very .vivid.

Send me picture please @ dirtyjoke800@gmail.com

Great story!!!! One of my all time favorites. Almost wish it were novel length for more reading pleasure.

Notice many have been asking for a copy of the photo (you sneaky rascal). Well, go ahead and send me a copy. (Don't tell me that the story is not true.)

I would love to see the pic that inspired it.

myjunkforme at yahoo dot com

Cheers and Regards

This is an amazing story, very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I would certainly appreciate seeing that picture. My email is ziamitchell@gmail.com

Again, well done!

Any man with a mind and eyes would love to see that shot. Your a lucky guy not everyone has a woman be patient and teach him the art of pleasing a woman. I wash I had that so young but better later than never

This was perhaps the most romantic and sensual story I have ever read It actually made me cry! The way you captured Cynthia is absolutely astounding, giving flesh and depth to the story. Making the characters more important than the sex itself made it all the more intimate. Bravo!

The best story I've ever read!!

very good story would love to see the picture my email is clouds.tgod@gmail.com

i remember summer loves like that as a teenager. it really touched base but i would love to see her scd65@hotmail.com

I'd love to see her! Will you share it with me? This was such a good story.

alancwise@me.com

Sensual & equally heart-warming story.. would love to see Cynth

E-mail : varunnagpal91@gmail.com

Brought back some great memories of past encounters that seemed to mean so much at the time and still do now. Would love to see the pic.

I had a similar experience with my first though excluding the camera and it is still fixed in my mind as if it were yesterday.

Please send the pic to colum6bus@hotmail.com

Ashley

Your soul as an artist shines brightly through this story. Would love to see her picture. Mcalevy@ gmail.com

Seriously, this is such an amazing story. You can feel the passion oozing out of every sentence. I always enjoy coming back to this one.

I'd love to see that picture.

saitchmaster@gmail.com

I would like to see the picture neatdog@hotmail.co.uk

I'd like to see the picture

chuckarancher@gmail.com

Love love love this.. Best I've read on here..

I'd love to see that pic as well.. Thanks..

dharklionz@rocketmail.com

Such a charged passionate story, really good.

Love to see the pic

markthelegend@gmail.com

This makes me revisit all of my younger years and first encounters with women. I love it. So well written and easy to imagine in my head. I'd love to see the picture too. george.maxwell.c@gmail.com

Very well told. I'd love to see the picture, too. gnomercy@gmail.com

This was such an enjoyable read. The first two and a half pages built up the tension so well. I'm truly impressed by the quality of this. Also, like many others, I'd love to see the picture and compare it to the image I have in my mind. Email is ianmcw13@gmail.com

Love this story. Very well written and very believable.

I would love to see this beautiful picture. rcullen5533@gmail.com.

Thanks and write more!

A really well told and beautiful story. I would love to see the photo, please send to: iaxs@yahoo.com

If the time is right for both of you - I hope you get back together.

Best wishes for future.

I've never been very in to erotic fiction because I find it too hasty and crude but this was simply stunning. Your words truly captured passion. I would be honored to see the image of this beautiful woman. Please send to back-arching@yahoo.com

Moving, sensitive, erotic without sliding into pornography. It was beautifully told!

I would love to see the picture of her. In my head it sounds beautiful.

cheetahreader@outlook.com

Thank you so much!

What a beautiful story! would love to see the snap shot soccerpro321123@aol.com

The story is simply incredible.. Being a photographer I lived the moments.. Really fantastic....

I desperately want to see....

shraddha.sh143@gmail.com

Amazing story

Fantastic story, loved how you built up to the conclusion. would love to see the snap shot of "Cynthia" if you would be so kind as to email it to me.

Can I please see those snapshots?

Deadly111@hotmail.com

Incredible. I'd love to see the shot. Could you send it to kfb5926@hotmail.com

Very nicely told. Sure sounds real. If so, it would be interesting to see if the reality equaled the image in my brain. :)

this would make a wonderful movie! Please send a snap shot to aceydeucie@yahoo.com

Thanks for reminding me why I love being a photographer!

I'd love to see that photo?(:

addict2317@yahoo.com

Amazing Read. New to this site. This is hands down the best story I have read yet. Would love to see the pic. Could you please send it to deckthis@gmail.com

Nice build up.

Loved the story. Would love to see the photo. Pl. send it to jit10025@yahoo.com

would love to see that pic recoetzee99@gmail.com

I've read this two or three times now, it gets better every time. It's just as though you're there, the descriptions you write allows you to feel the tension, to almost feel Cynth as he felt her. The constant reference to her smile somehow makes her seem so sweet, whilst also being so hot and sexy at the same time. I liked the way you built up the tension in such a slow and deliberate way, it made the 'climax' that much more explosive when it happened. The only way I feel the story might have been improved would have been had the two of them spent the night together before her wedding, or if the marriage had failed and she made tearful return to 'the boy next door' who would have undoubtedly received her with open arms.

But nothing can detract from the story you wrote. It was worth a dozen stars, let alone the 5 stars I have given it.

So thanks for a great story !

I'd love to see it! pauline.yu77@yahoo.ca

coolguyrealcool24@gmail.com

justincasethesecond@gmail.com

joshi213421@gmail.com

What an amazing, sensual and erotic essay. You should really have continued writing with your eye, a sensitivity and excitement for your subject and how moving it was to the reader. One of the best stories I have read here in years. I was totally mesmerized by your creativity and beauty in your description. It was so real and exciting. It left me breathless.. Thank you for sharing your talent. Maybe adding a picture would add to the reality of this tale.

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site I hope you write more and I would love to see the picture of your Cynthia my email is mattdedman@aol.com please keep wroting

i concur.

truly well written,

a lovely classic work that is so deserving

thank you

now where do I go to vote.....

A favourite

georgesand44@yahoo.it

please

Thank you for one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The pictures you painted with your words were spectacular. I can't imagine how many thousands of requests you must have had for the picture.

of the writer is captured in words and phrases, like the light in the clouds just after sunset for a landscape tog's shutter release.

I don't think I have read a submission as many times as I have read this one. I cannot applaud you on this, as it will sound empty and disappear amiss the crowd's cheer.

But I will give you a gentleman's approving nod on a priceless art piece.

volenti.non@gmail.com

The long slow build up of anticipation was as agonizing as it was erotic. In my minds eye I could see the images woven so clearly. I'm still torn, was this skillful fiction or memories of true life? Part of me wants to know another doesn't want to break the illusion.

This is one of the most electrifying stories I've ever read. I'm sure that the pictures were memorable but the shared adventure of the shoot, with a "first love", is very exhilarating. Thanks for the sharing.

thank you for advance

phograph@free.fr

Loved the slow excitement of both as she slowly reveals herself. She is as excited as he is, if not more so, and that makes the eroticism greater. Well written.

Can you send the photo to me? Email mkhll129z@gmail.com

excellent memoir about the source of passion. i would love to see the pictures if you would not mind. jaco.venter19@gmail.com. thank you

Love the way you describe every important detail, not too much and not too short. And of course a very hot mix of naughtiness and a tiny little bit of a romantic atmosphere. Very well written.

Can you please also send me the pictures?

-> klonko-buck@web.de

I am traveling through Provence on vacation and decided to read your story while taking a break. Your well crafted words, the slow deliberate pace and the beautiful images of lustful youth held me entranced. I couldn't stop reading and I told the tour leader to continue on with his group and I would catch up layer. Your wonderful story on a lovely day in the lush French countryside have been the highlight of this trip. Thank you for that and thank you for your story.

This story is so well written I could swear it was taken from a book.

The blend of youth and innocence and hidden lust really builds the essence of the story. The melancholy ending brings a bittersweet tone to the story that somehow makes this all the better, this is by far the best writen lit erotica story I have seen and I hope to find more!

A good day to you my dear chap,

A friend

I know when I am in the presence of a master storyteller. My only sorrow is that this is your only story here. If you are serious about the photo, could I please see it?

Amazing is really the one word needed to describe your story. This story should be in a category of its own. I can't believe I stumbled upon this story mixed among so much garbage. Thank you for sharing your snap shot memory.

very sweet story ! It was sexual but much more than that ... something to remember

Find her, She may need you. It will soon be too late so don't wait. You love her and always have. Memories are great but the real thing is much much better.

robbed superlatives of their value.

This story is a superlative one.

I'm confident you must be a professional storyteller who posted this a decade ago in hope of reaching an old friend.

I hope it worked.

Thanks.

(As an amateur photographer who gave up portraiture when I got married, I'm very eager to see the surviving pic, if the offer is still open....)

great-I'm emulating your narrative style in describing my day. This has helped me a lot about my actions, results, frustrations, and interactions with my wife of 44 years. Thank you-you're a writer!

l would love to take a peek at that snapshot

I've read a lot of stories here. A very few equal this one for strength of voice, lyrical quality, and power to evoke the sensations of young love and discovery. None that I've yet found exceed it.

Thank you, thank you for sharing this.

Praises for this story! So well written, hot and sensuous, capturing the joy of sex as a youth and the innocence of the encounter. Of course if you are really offering a picture I'd love to see it but would be a bit afraid that it won't live up to the picture you painted. Thanks!

What an absolutely amazing story, one of the best I've read on this site.

I'm not as old to be a character in the years that this story is set but only about 10 years away and gosh it takes me back. If only I had someone as utterly beautiful to snap away at with my 35mm film! I would certainly have kept them, and/or the negatives and what a great memory to look back on if this is based on a true story.

If you really are willing to share that photo that really would make a great addition to the story. Please keep up the writing!

A masterpiece in shades and hues, vibrant as any oil or watercolor art. BRAVO

You have captured the essence of the era, the age, and the profession in five pages of wonderful erotica. Even as he was capturing her essence on film, so you have captured the essence of boudoir photography.

Thank you for drifting me down memory's lane to when I took my first glamour photos and discovered that I had just enough talent to make very pleasing photos, but not enough talent to go professional.

Please keep writing, although you may have hit the pinnacle of your presentations in this one story. You write, I'll keep reading.

A brilliant read that made you want to be a fly on the wall then that age old saying "wish you was here" comes to mind soooooooo enjoyed this read deff my fav , thank you

What a beautiful story. I don't want to see the photo - I just want to imagine it as the picture you painted.

You have painted a wonderful word picture for us. You story is especially meaningful to me since I graduated in 1965. Those were innocent days and you were able to live them to the fullest. Not only are you a master photographer but you are a word smith as well! Thank You for sharing and I would love to see the photograph.

so descriptive and full of life. love this.