All Comments on 'Softly, She Treads Ch. 04'

by XyJonah

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DarknsDarknsabout 1 year ago

Unlike any I have read here. Bravo!

DiJiTDiJiTover 17 years ago
Wonderful...but sad

As with all chapters of this tory it was absolutely amazing, but I must say I am very sad. It will be the last of this story. I would have read every chapter of this story and loved it even if it went on forever.

I truly am looking forward to your next submission.

Judging by this story. We will all be in for a real treat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Brilliant

Kudos !!

Namaste.

Roge472xalRoge472xalover 17 years ago
I was too self-indulgent!

And I wish, now, that I had not read three chapters in one sitting, with none left to wait for!

Except for the next story, of course! :-)

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Mystical conclusion.

Such a lovely tale that meandered through so many delightful literary paths to a heartfelt lovely conclusion. Rarely have I read a more complete, a more satisfying story. Terrific Write! Very enjoyable Read.

Kowboy61Kowboy61over 17 years ago
I shall miss ...

... reading the chapters of this tale. Ms. Jonah is a very talented writer. She weaves the many facits of this world through very intric descriptions with the base storyline. I am saddened that I have no more to look forward to. That is until Ms. Jonah's next submission.

Bravo Xy and THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Hmmmm This was a Fantastic Read

KUDO's Authoress.

I haven't read much here to equal this work and now I look forward to more - from you.

Thanks with appreciation & Best Regards

Kowboy61Kowboy61over 17 years ago
I shall miss ...

... reading the chapters of this tale. Ms. Jonah is a very talented writer. She weaves the many facits of this world through very intric descriptions with the base storyline. I am saddened that I have no more to look forward to. That is until Ms. Jonah's next submission.

Bravo Xy and THANK YOU.

Kowboy61Kowboy61over 17 years ago
I shall miss ...

... reading the chapters of this tale. Ms. Jonah is a very talented writer. She weaves the many facits of this world through very intric descriptions with the base storyline. I am saddened that I have no more to look forward to. That is until Ms. Jonah's next submission.

Bravo Xy and THANK YOU.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great

Amazing story!

Boyd

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So it's been 12 years since I last wrote erotica. In that time I've had quite a ride: put my writing to good use, got good, got published and quoted, got jaded. And someone made "Softly..." into a short animated film! When your veins run with words, and your brain constantly ...

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