by Samuelx
That was good, you should turn it into a series. More sex ;)
Why is it that your entire collection of dribble as a whole stinks to high heaven. You are a talentless writer. Reading your baggage is like watching Paula Deen cook authentic french cuisine (it ain't gonna happen). Quantity doesn't mean quality. For the life of me I can't grasp any reason for encouragement. Find another hobby, writing is not your forte mate.
Up until the last paragraph you put what actually matters no one cares about her family life or religion. That doesn't matter, no dialogue AT ALL and then more pointless info...ALL OF YOUR STORIES ARE LIKE THAT. Its like reading a fucking history book then erotica afterwards..when we are already bored with the beginning.
The lost of the Somali girls in diaspora. No future no Family just fuck fuck fuck.
we waiting for you when you hit the wall and come back to your roots. the Question is who wants to a Bitch !!!?