All Comments on 'Something Fishy Came Along'

It has a decent plot but you have a lot of work to do. Repetition of words or sentences for that matter is a big turn offf not to mention wrong usage of words. Do get yourself an editor. I'm sure your stories (if there were anymore) would get better if you get them corrected first.

The ending was wrong. He waited 11 years to use her????? I don't think so.

unexpected ending, though I should known because of the non-consent label. I would have ended it with 'they lived happily ever after by the shore', but.. that's the way I think.

Sudden dose of reality. lol I would love to read a follow-up story!

I’m sorry who wants a pringles can shoved in their vag? She probably isn’t able to walk anymore ouch