All Comments on 'Sowakie Ch. 02'

Nice though the dialogs should be in inverted commas.

DAMN, loved it, felt it. MORE PLEASE.

A decent story,some of the grammer was a bit off.It is Knew as in she Knew not new,and their hut,not there hut,,and bare not bear,when naked,(bare ass naked)(bear is an animal.It was a bit fast and choppy,needed more intro,a little longer story would have been good.A nice read anyway.