All Comments on 'Sowakie Ch. 02'

A decent story,some of the grammer was a bit off.It is Knew as in she Knew not new,and their hut,not there hut,,and bare not bear,when naked,(bare ass naked)(bear is an animal.It was a bit fast and choppy,needed more intro,a little longer story would have been good.A nice read anyway.

DAMN, loved it, felt it. MORE PLEASE.

Nice though the dialogs should be in inverted commas.