All Comments on 'Staring At The Ocean Ch. 05'

to it all...loved it. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

This story has gone from "good" in the first 3 chapters to "outstanding" in chapters 4 and 5. Thank you BelleHoney for the great pleasure I get from reading your story.

this is a really good story, and i like how you give us several different point-of-view's. but sometimes, the pronouns are all mixed up because of the point of view switch and gets distracting. overall, a good job. =)