All Comments on 'Steven's Long Night'

The writing was pretty good and the concept is quite erotic, but the gals were too nasty. The unwashed bottom and forced anal licking were beyond my limit, so I did not find the overall story as erotic as we would like. Many readers will be more tolerant or accepting, and they will be enjoy it more.

I can see where it would be torture to have a smelly pussy over your face,But I would have liked to have seen the wife have a super sexy sweet pussy over her face, and a good cunt licker sucking her pussy,making her pass out from orgasms.By morning she would be a dedicated cunt sucker, begging for another load of woman cum....Rich

Not the best one, but quite good.

the victims have teeth.

No husband or wife would give up fighting for each other.

Sick stroke story.

So after torturing and abusing them the wife turns against him? I'm thinking that these women are going to prison for a long, long, long time. Why bother? Nothing in this poorly written story makes any sense. Waste of time.

What was the point? They're getting a divorce. The women are going to jail. Who cares?

Conclude what happened at end are they both enjoying or they had divorce this is lame story

Why does the Author not mention what the women looks like ? Why is the fat Carla sitting beside him on the bed , tickling his feet ! ? She should lay on top of him smothering him with her 400 pounds. This story is worthless.

Beth will be broken and become Audrey's slave. She will file for divorce from Stephen. Audrey will use Beth by having her name other homophobic racist women for conversion onto sweet submissive lesbian slaves. And Beth will revel in conversing an unpretentious white bitch who hated black men into a submissive woman liking licking black pussy of her mean Mistress who will determine when she can be impregnated by a well endowed black man.