All Comments on 'Stolen Ch. 03'

I am not really into pain or anything I think I like Ren a LOT better than hawk and kind of hope he ends up leaving with her.

i kind of hope that Ren will end up with her. I do hope you continue this story.

if ren later (ren - shades of grey) said he thought sky was just hawk's abused girlfriend, why would he say he'd like to buy her? its a bit inconsistent

The letter K does not go before words ... if English is your 2nd language please get a proof reader or editor. This story is difficult to read with all the grammar and spelling errors. Good luck as you continue to write.