All Comments on 'Strangers at the Club'

I don't mind a story that jumps right in but this gets going after less than 2 sentences. There's little description making the story painfully quick and short, and there are more than a couple spelling and grammatical errors. Good concept, I would encourage another try with more description and build up.

the idea was good but the execution was not really good. no build up and the story is so short that i doubt even a man could cum that fast, reading