All Comments on 'Strangers at the Club'

the idea was good but the execution was not really good. no build up and the story is so short that i doubt even a man could cum that fast, reading

I don't mind a story that jumps right in but this gets going after less than 2 sentences. There's little description making the story painfully quick and short, and there are more than a couple spelling and grammatical errors. Good concept, I would encourage another try with more description and build up.