All Comments on 'Strip Hearts Ch. 03'

by alternatereality125

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CalliciousCalliciousalmost 10 years ago
Now there it something to vote on.

I think you have an interesting concept here. The first three chapters together would have been about right to give us something to look forward to, and it would have been a good breakpoint to leave us with a cliff hanger.

alternatereality125alternatereality125almost 10 years agoAuthor
yup agreed.... thanks!

this really should've been like 4-5 parts instead of the 12 that I've done and uploaded. as I've mentioned in my previous comment I've submitted an edit, so we'll see. Thanks for your feedback!

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 10 years ago
Like the Build up

I hope you plan on a long story. with twist's and turn's in every chapter. Now let the Game Begin.

alternatereality125alternatereality125almost 10 years agoAuthor
urmmm what?

Yes I have played hearts?...at least the pre-installed Windows version. =P I don't know where you're going with your comment Anonymous. Ah well.

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