All Comments on 'Strip Hearts Ch. 03'

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alternatereality125alternatereality125about 10 years agoAuthor
urmmm what?

Yes I have played hearts?...at least the pre-installed Windows version. =P I don't know where you're going with your comment Anonymous. Ah well.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 10 years ago
Like the Build up

I hope you plan on a long story. with twist's and turn's in every chapter. Now let the Game Begin.

alternatereality125alternatereality125about 10 years agoAuthor
yup agreed.... thanks!

this really should've been like 4-5 parts instead of the 12 that I've done and uploaded. as I've mentioned in my previous comment I've submitted an edit, so we'll see. Thanks for your feedback!

CalliciousCalliciousabout 10 years ago
Now there it something to vote on.

I think you have an interesting concept here. The first three chapters together would have been about right to give us something to look forward to, and it would have been a good breakpoint to leave us with a cliff hanger.

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