by Reindeer58
Gorgeous women, beautifully clothed and posed, make for a great premise. There's heat here too. However, the dialogue and pace, or lack of it, is killing me - it goes on and on and on... . I understand the teasing - varying degrees from different women - but this is exhausting. We're through four chapters with no sex - I'm losing interest.
Three gorgeous neighbours and Jack's only now getting to know them! Good build up but how can he take the continual teasing and up to Chapter 4 only a couple of BJ's! He really is made of steel.... Am very keen to read on as I'm sure Reindeer58 has majoe plans for 1:1, 2:1, 3:1 and every other combination in subsequent chapters, - dont you! Thanks very much.
xox Sammy
A lot of tease and a well written story, hope to read more.