All Comments on 'Summer Ch. 02'

THe girl of all of our dreams...i just hope this won't be her last adventure!

I would marry this kind of girl!!! Well, I did marry this kind of girl. Excellent post! Love your style. Want to see more about you and Summer!

This story is very well-written. The dialogue was realistic. The pacing, which is very important in this kind of story, was slow and steady.

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The imagery could have been more detailed and vivid.

Writer deserves to be congratulated on a very well written piece.

This story lacked the necessary build up for a good fuck. In reality there is no "instant" fucking, and this story had the body to build up to an extraordinary coupling/mating, with even provisions for an accidental pregnancy. I don't really see how you can think you are owed a decent score on this one?

This story lacks the necessary build up for a good fuck? Instant sex doesn't just happen?<p>

Summer teased Jake, for weeks. She drove him insane, all day. She flashed him in the apartment. She flirted with him in the car. She gave him a hand job over dinner. She flashed him in the bar.<p>

By that point, who wouldn't be dying to fuck her? What planet do you live on, where a two chapter tease is considered "instant sex," and "not enough build up for a good fuck." People who only just met five minutes ago often manage to have good fucks.<p>

I edit those stories, every day.<p>

Summer and Jake? They had more than enough build up to enjoy a good fuck, which they most certainly did, and who said anything about any accidental pregnancies or the author saying he's owed anything?

You've never submitted a story here, but you're going to say this story, which is one of the highest rated stories of 2008, deserves the worst score possible.<p>

Taking a wild stab at this, I'm going to have to guess that you're nothing but a troll. With completely off the mark comments like that, and the giving of a completely ridiculous troll score, you're clearly trolling. Go away, troll.<p>

Editor Doc, in Big D.

Don 87654, <p>

You give this a fucking ZERO score? This story? On a website filled for 90% with absolute written TRASH, you give THIS a zero? <p>

It's fuckers like you who make great authors stop writing. Stop being a fucking troll and kindly do everyone a favor and never fucking comment or vote again. People like you are the reason why Literotica has gone to fucking shit over the last five years. <p>

If you don't like the story, fine, an author can't please everyone. If you think the teasing didn't go on long enough, that's fine too. But to give this a ZERO? You've gotta be fucking joking. Sadly, though, you're not. Fucking unbelievable. <p>

Outrageously GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I just discovered your stories, can't wait to read all the rest that you have posted, if they are half as good as this they will still be TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!

SUMMER is SOOOOOOOOOOO Hot!!!!!!!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wish I could only vote HIGHER than they let me!!!!!!!

I know there are more stories of Summer and Jake just waiting for me to read and enjoy. Still, I hope they have many, many adventures ahead of them.

As another redhead, I'd love to be able to relax about things like Summer.

perfectly timed climax in the club, loved the not bad theme, the constant pushing of boundaries, summer sounds delicious

Summer did a lot of things my exwife and I did over our 20 hot years of total hedonism.

If I was a writer, I would heat up Literotica with some true stories.

Best character "Summer" really hot and really fun. Which is a great quality in a very bad girl.