All Comments on 'Sunrise at Last'

Send her my way and i will put a load in her so you can eat . Ya wimpy cumsucking half a fag cuckyboy . I will make you my bitch too.

Yes, I know this fourth chapter is in Group Sex, but my comment applies to the entire series (1-3 in LW) and the final in GS)

it was not well received

Being a cum dumpster is not an aspiration to seek , let alone acquire , I cannot fathom the husband/wife bonding being enhanced by having extra-marital sex ! It seems to me it would degrade ,corrode , corrupt and extinguish the love between them , until the negative effects would affect the sanctimony to the point of disaster ! Other than my bitching about it , I thought the story was pretty well written and had enough of my attention to keep it flowing , grammatical errors aside !

Great story. Can you write any more?