All Comments on 'Sunset'

This story moves to fast

Luscious and interesting. More please, but might I suggest a good editor. There are several great ones on this site that would be glad to help you polish your skills. Blessed Be =^_^=

given a clear lack of proofreading and the fact that I did not really care for the story. I make no claims to any writing ability myself, but I read a lot and I know good from bad, or in this case average. In this genre Elianna is deservedly well regarded, and I enjoyed Amoons Underground story. Each to their own I suppose. -- UK CYNIC

I enjoyed this very much! UK Cynic, feel free to write something better if you think you can.

I know the girlies like their bad boys but this was pretty poor. Minimal plot and a lot of mistakes in the writing. You led me astray and are due a cyber spanking. -- UK CYNIC

Delicious story!

great story would love more

I love vampire tales. Great story.