All Comments on 'Surprise Ch. 02'

Wonderful, wonderful story. The only nit I would pick is both times there was sex they jumped into bondage/master pretty fast with no apparent discussion. All the time getting to know and talking without anything sexual even discussed? But you wrote real people doing real things and nothing mean and ugly! Yea, you!

A little fast in its development, as mentioned by Anonymous below, but a fine story nonetheless - and who knows - when two people want the same thing so much, is talking about it the right thing? I don't know, to be honest - but I would have loved to be in her position!

Thank you for both parts of this story - will there be any more? Five stars.

Thanks for the comments so far, good to get feedback. As for another story, don't know. depends on whether I get inspired to write one!