All Comments on 'Surprise Package'

Warm little story — but I'm not sure I'd want some strange man (one time before?) sneaking into a woman's house, and into her bedroom, without her knowing! LOL! But, hey, this is a fantasy and its fiction so why not. No one was hurt, no one was coerced, and its happily ever after time!

story was okay...this has nothing to do with how you wrote your story but i just wish that people would stop claiming that valentines day was made up by greeting card companies..yes it may have been exploited by greeting card companies but the holiday does have meaning if you just take the time to read about it.

Your story was great nothing to complain about!

The passion was great... keep writing... it even had potential to keep going....

Okay as a story, but wrong category.