All Comments on 'Susan Started It'

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William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
Well done

A well written first story. Good story line.

Hope to see more soon from this writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Spelling

Next time please use your spell checker...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
name change

is it me or did she change from susan to sarah ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"slid my prick de pinot her cunt"

Could have been a good story if there weren't so many mistakes with spelling and grammar..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
simply

Rape!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Couple older women are best

Susan started it.

Sarah finished it.

After a brief encounter, the woman changed her name and left.

It's never happened to me. I must be doing something right.

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