All Comments on 'SX69 - Ultimate Love Potion Ch. 25'

by KissedMany

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Dreamcatcher24Dreamcatcher24over 4 years ago
Good story

Good start but a little disappointing in a womans perspective. Lots of mindless servitude. I'm sure the guys would love this! Very much written by a dude for a dude but still interesting. I can play along for awhile, but maybe add some more foreplay on his part? Like he actually cares and she's not just another "cow for the herd" lol

KissedManyKissedManyover 4 years agoAuthor
I hear you Dreamcatcher

My stories are about the carnal, base instincts of lust. The kind of lust where people are in a bubble swimming in illogical desires. Men in masculine power and women in feminine seductiveness, the two forces that dance and consummate sexual union to keep our species from extinction.

My thought that I explore in this story is, 'A powerful woman in business has built a wall around her femininity and the SX69 tears down the wall to help her reclaim her sensuality, her femininity- and she loves it inside the lust bubble.'

Agreed that I jumped too fast into sex in this story. In non-SX69 stories, foreplay is a sweet dance I enjoy. With SX69, the dosing creates instant results. But with the SX69, Viagra for Women, I should slow the process because it's effects are temporary experience not a long term transformation.

Thanks for taking the interest to post your thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
honestly...

not the least bit interesting, rather this shouldn't abuse the sx69 tag and just start a new story using same characters if you really want. cuz what's really happening is you're starting a new story and new plots, but hoping to use the popularity of another series you made to fuel it. that's basically how you know it can't stand on its own feet. eagerly awaiting for the original story to continue with keith, personally.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Just Love the Story

You can't just end this story here. You have intrigued me with theses new trials of womanly Viagra, it makes me wish I was a woman myself, my sex life has been non - existent for 25 years and if I were lucky to find someone now it probably would unexpectedly be a man.

In the first original part of this story Victors first subject Sarah leaves his harum to join with another man who could most likely get her pregnant but there is no mentioning of how she is doing in any of the latter issues of this story or of Elizabeth after Victor retrieves her from the slob and gives her to his well hung stable boy and I'm curious to know how the idiot who was going to try and get moneys out of Victor only to see Victor fucking his wife, how has their lives come to be now that she has the SX49 in her system. I wish I had a e-mail address so you could get back and let me know if you will continue this story or give me thoughts about my letter. My name is Colin.

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