All Comments on 'Symbiosis'

I'd say it's good but definately not my favorite sexual predator story :p

I mean sex and torture isn't the most promising theme to begin with in my opinion. On the other hand, it did work surprisingly well in one of Terry Goodkind's the sword of truth series novels. I suppose the difference is in the fact that in this story the captivity seems permanent and I can't seem to bring myself to consider the three sisters as "real".

The relationship described in this story is definitely *parasitic* and not *symbiotic*. Symbiosis is a relationship that is beneficial to BOTH participants.

YOUR STORY LINE IS GREAT BUT IT JUST DROPS OFF THE END OF THE WORLD. GIVE IT A MORE ROBUST ENDING OR EVEN A BETTER CONTINUATION AND IT OULS BE FINE.