All Comments on 'Tabitha Ch. 09'

these two are cuteness. not feeling his ex-band so much though.

great to have this story back, i look for updates all the time, and too excited to see tabitha's name there, yay!!

thanks for the update.enjoyed your story.

Reread this from the beginning. Enjoyed cathing up on Wes and Tabitha. Looking forward to more.

I also had to reread to remember everything. This is a great story but it loses impact when there is such a long break between chapters. I understand that you have a life and writing on a free site doesn't come even close to first... But... if you are taking a break, leave a note on your profile or something so people understand. Waiting endlessly is not fun and it diminishes the enjoyment of the chapter when it finally does arrive. This story is too good to let that happen. I'm really hoping the next chapter is in the works. Thanks for writing.

i was pleasantly surprised to see that you finally submitted a new chapter. after checking every few weeks for the past several months for an update, i had resigned myself to believing you had just abandoned the story. like the others, i had to re-read to remember what was going on in the story. a minor gripe is the subplot with tabitha's nosy co-worker. it seems contrived and adds nothing to the story. society people being photographed and published in a magazine? annoying? yes. big deal? not so much. otherwise, nice work.

i must agree with the previous commenter regarding the length of time between updates. something really is lost when one has to wait nearly six months for an updated chapter (continuity, interest, fanbase). i hesitate to force demands on you as you are providing a service and treat for the readers to enjoy, but not so long next time, please.

Love these two!!!!!

Thank you for the update. I fall in love with these two more and more. I love the story and your other work keep it coming. :D

Wonderful story update soon thank you

Chopin? Just wondering