All Comments on 'Take a Chance'

This story could very well turn much more erotic. Maybe they need to fuck and without birth control of course and begin their family where an affair with the mother had not developed?

It was a good start at the story. I can hardly wait for the next chapter of this story. I hope you don't wait too long before writing the next chapter of the story.

Now you have to follow up with more... please.

What happened to the rest of the chapter???????

this is a story? didn't You leave out something?

Keep going -- where's the action? :)