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warmicw30warmicw30over 12 years ago
ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OK,you are going good but way and i mean wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too short for me to even grasps the character in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice start

This was a nice introduction but have to agree it was far too short to fully develop a real feel for the people in it. I will watch patiently for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great start, a little short though. A little editing needed too, please write some more soon.

NAUGHTYLITTELBOYGIRLNAUGHTYLITTELBOYGIRLover 12 years ago
GREAT BEGINING BUT TOO SHORT !!

IM HOOKED MORE PLEASE!!!!!!: )

horsechick91horsechick91over 12 years ago
i'm intreged

what a wonderful beginning. i cant wait to see where this leads.

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