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I'm sure that I will be accused of being picky, but there are errors which spoil the flow of the story.

As she sat with her knees propped up on [upon?] the desk ... His eyes were a light [alight] with mischief a. ... She struggle[d] her hardest, trying to wrench his grip ... Her wash of black hair landed just above her round taught [taut] ass....her breasts were larger then her [than he'd] first guessed....he had wanted her for so long the [that] he wanted to revel in it....forward so he[r] ass was right at the edge of the desk ...He leaned down to suck tenderly at her nipples as slowly [he slowly, or slowly he?] started to pump in and out of her...