All Comments on 'Teaching Rebecca A Lesson'

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songman60songman60over 19 years ago
FANTASTIC STORY FOR A FIRST EFFORT!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Very well written, especially for a first posting, and I enjoyed the erotic content as well. (I guess I'm just a sucker for the short blonde, or red-haired, schoolgirl and an older partner. I would have drawn out the teasing just a tad more, though. I'm glad to see that you have Rebecca coming back for some more "tutoring" next week. It gives you a chance to further develop your story.

A suggested twist is to have Rebecca reporting Rob to the Headmaster. A meeting is scheduled with the Headmaster, Rob, and Rebecca, then the two authority figures double-up on her to tutor young Rebecca in how to REALLY be a good slut (maybe a BDSM theme could be employed), and young Rebecca discovers that she is a true submissive and she LOVES IT. The possiblities are endless though. You must pardon my kinky side.

katxmeowxkatxmeowxalmost 14 years ago
Hot

I loved it keep writing

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