All Comments on 'Tease to Please Ch. 04'

The character development is great. The lack of knowledge about Dr. Yamamoto works great for the story - and allows flexibility in the plot.

Glad that you are steering away from sex (at least for now) - there is too much of that on the net already. Unique stuff like this is a rare treasure.

This one I look for every morning.

Please keep up the good work. Love the descriptions of the outfits.

You are creating something special..keep up the good work. your story is a great example of how to write a great erotic story without in-your-face sex and nudity! It is much more effective when its subtle!

I love reading this, I'm an 18 year old girl and just love it.

Very unique, can't wait for the next part

I look for each new chapter in anticipation of what's going to unfold next.

Thanks for sharing....

RecHiker

What happened to no visible underwear?

She should be showing her genitals :-)

Maybe working fully nude soon?

Wonderful work. Dont rush to get Elise fully naked, for me the tease is this series real appeal. Keep writing more!

These 4 chapters are extraordinary. I am not in a hurry you begin the "please" part, because the "tease" part is amongst the best stories I have read.

Quote: "I can't afford to blow my summer like this. It'd be even worse than last year." Unquote.

Will we learn what happend last year?

Curious

Seems like a missed opportunity to have Alex make her cum on the bike. Maybe not publicly but once they get back. Definitely spun my own fantasy off that.