All Comments on 'Tech Specs Inc. Ch. 01'

Wonderful work. Love the characters. Your descriptions are highly detailed and nicely developed. Very interesting idea you are developing. Can't wait to see what her first demonstration before the staff will be like. Thanks for writing this.

Well detailed, particularly the panic.

And a surprised ending, too.

Damned good, Lady.

HP

nice work, Di...you've given a nicely developed context to the sex, enhancing its eroticism. The panic is good, but I did feel the stripping for both ladies was a little too mechanical. But, hell, it's a tech write firm! Let's see more; I do like descriptive detail.

I'm suitably impressed. It's too seldom that you read a piece that is tightly written, well structured, has a storyline and is titillating. Are there sequels?

And very hot. You're a good writer, Lady Dianthus. I hope you write more stories for Literotica.

Stuck on AH, this is the first story of yours I've read.

Great! Just loved the build-up and development.

Really nicely done. Congrats.

Nicely paced, Di. Very nicely written. I enjoyed it very much.

the suspense is amazing and very exciting!! thanks for sharing Di!!

Erotic story, would love to read more.

Really enjoyed reading it.

I think you should add a few sentences about the content of Sarah's novel, which might lead in better to showing the readers more about how/why She is open to the encounter which follows.

Is there a Part 2 ?

(for the record, yes, it got me very hard - thanks)

This is a wondeful little gem. It left me hungry for more. I hope you plan to continue this story.

Wow! Very erotic. I'm looking forward to more...

with Sarah running into the applicant in the hallway. Nicely written, although I do agree the stripping was a bit mechanical. Like the others I also hope there are more episodes on the way. Especially if there are any episodes that lead to encounters with clients!

You have a gift for description. Very hot story!!

I just wish everything on Lit was this good. Thank you, from one aspiring writer to another.

Interesting and sexy. Me likes.

very seductive...a pleasure to read!

I really liked the set up for this story. Glad to see companies expanding their client base to ensure employment for their staff. I think demonstrative efforts during a job interview are a must. Well described here. Have you thought of writing a sequel to this story? I'm envisioning Sarah during her first team project. She will have to pick out a new set of lucky underwear.

but I'll comment again. Delicious.

Dianthus's story is hot. It also tells the story of desperate people in desperate times. Good job Di! Yeah, it's a 5 for sure. Can't wait for the next chapter.

There's an author, C.S. Friedman, whom I read when I was in my early teens. Before becoming an author, she worked in costume designed. It showed in her writing. The way she painted the garments, how she swirled them around, paraded them for the reader with her words, was almost pornographic. I would sometimes get the image, when reading her descriptions, of the writer nestled naked in bed, tangled from head to toe in loose lengths of different fabrics. Rolling about with her laptop in hand, I envisioned her pulling and teasing herself with the various bits of cloth, comparing the feel of the different weaves. That's how strongly her love of clothing came across.

I feel something similar in you. The renderings of the characters' dress, the nuances of their outfits, are so precise, so meticulously loving. It's style porn. It's very interesting. Sexy chic.

Very erotic and keeps you on the edge so to speak.

Wish the interviews I conducted were that hot!