by Ada Stuart
Y'know I didn't start with chapter 1 when reading your story. So reading it now, I realize this doesn' do it justice. This chapter is full of love-hate relationship clihes. I think you use the word arrogant and stalker to describe the cop about ten times. And the women kept referring to him as a "thing" or "specimen." Which is fine when you're making a point, that he's just eye candy to them, but it got a little redundant.
and checking your site every day for new stories, and this one looks like it'll be a treat!
Thank you!!
...apparently it's going to turn into another rape story.
Unfortunately there are enough of those sickies on Lit already