All Comments on 'Thank You, Sir!'

Sexy and descriptive, well-written if missing a few full-stops, but why is she being punished in the first place? It's as if you've forgotten the main story and just brought us the 'cherry on top'.

Nice as that may be - and is - your story is seriously lacking a story! Again, not bad, four stars for intensity, but please try to develop your characters and go for a little context.

Suits u sir.. ;-)

Wow... Again you have written a great great story. I lived it as I read it and can only hope that I get to live it for real.

Look forward to more.