by lovecraft68
I am fairly sure this is the second time I have read this...and it is as thrilling to me this time as it was before!!
It is obvious, from the start that "Sammi" is in there, and she has feelings for Justin...he is too stupid to realize it; plus, having his "BEST FRIEND" as his girlfriend is the best of ALL WORLDS!! Who better than the person who knows you best, already, and all your secrets/quirks/foibles!!
My wife is THAT PERSON; we knew each other as friends before; she heard all my crap about my ex-wife\counseled me/let me cry on her shoulder. All the while she put on the façade of being happily married to her husband.
We ended up divorced at the same time, and, VOILÁ, we fell into love, and it has been LOVE ever since. Yes, the usual bumps along the way, BUT FRIENDS-FIRST, LAST, ALWAYS!! 'TIL DEATH DO US PART...
So, to Sammi and Justin...HOORAY!!
AND five stars for the story!!🌠🌠🌠🌠🌠🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌😍😍😍😍😍
Well written. Great story line. Why not add another chapter, polishing the story off with a confrontation between Jen and Sammi, possibly more than once. Say, maybe the first time is Sammi answering the door Saturday nite, in just her thong, and then a week later when he takes her to a threater, as promised, in front of their friends and fellow students, making everyone know they were a couple, not just an item. Keep writing.
XYZ
At least one more “first.” This is the first story I have actually rated on this site. (Obviously a 5)
I found the sex hot and the nonsexual elements even better
It’s both challenging and inspiring for new authors to see what is possible.
Excellent story, and it sounds almost authentic, as though the whole thing, or at least parts actually happened. Nice to see it happens sometimes. We eagerly await more!
Truly great story. This is one I come back to again and again. Despite the protagonists sometimes grating blindness! First Justin, most egregiously; I spend pages shaking my head at him. And then Sam starts trying to throw everything away before it can even start! These damn kids! But I think they got it worked out finally. Sam is awesome and Justin doesn't deserve her in the begining, until he gets his act together!
Amazing story and writing. Probably one of the few times I've given a 5 star.
This was a great story. I really liked that he was the innocent and she had experience and took control, a big departure from most stories like this. Thanks for posting it.
I would love for this story to advance, while dabbing about in different romance books I thought about erotica. My first time on this site and I find a gem like this? I hope this story can go further, I love it.
My 2nd time through, and it still holds up as a great viginity-shedding tale!
I've read this charming story again and again, and it's just as hot every time. Thanks for writing it!
Seriously one of the best stories on this site. Wish there were more to this.
Oh my loved this! One of the best I've read hear.Like how Sam and Justin's relationship evolved to culminate with their sex which was so well described. Had me so aroused I had to pleasure myself.The two confirming their love
left me in tears.
I've read long, slow burn stories hundreds of them, most don't tend to be so realistic. It was well done but the MCs ignorance was killing me and the situation of him being toyed with while he passed on others and yet had one who cared for him kinda gnaws at me too much as the story is way too similar to my life and I definitely don't wanna read a retelling of that. So you get 2 scores from me, a 1/5 and a 5/5. Stories like this need a New Tag [Warning: Viewer Discretion is Advised] (This story may fuck up your man feels) [Warning: Viewer Discretion is Advised]
Amazing that I never read this before. It's beautifully innocent and lovely.
This is simply the best story I've read on this site or in any novel. The relationship and characters... Amazing
I only recently joined, but I have visited. I couldn't tell you how many times I've read this story. It is a beautiful story, beautifully told.
Awesome love story between friends whom waited long enough to finally be more than friends. Perhaps not a fantasy story but an actual sexual encounter always there waiting for the right moment. I’d like to think how this would finally be a happening between a childhood friend still to this day with only distance between us being the undoing. Excellent writing..
Need a follow up to see about the old GF and how the family react to this new GF
One of the best of the category. 5*
Sad to know girls like that don't exist except in fairytales
From what I've read you're a great writer. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to finish this story, I got about halfway through, but the thing with Jen just hit too close to home. And while that's not exactly a compliment, it does speak to your skills as a writer to be able to provoke those feelings.
sorry but I've gotta shout this so u can hear me when I say "YOU'VE GOTTA FINISH THIS STORYLINE PLEASE, "
This is a truly outstanding story! I was enthralled from start to finish,and wantto say that first-time stories may be my thing!
One of the best I've read on the site so far. Excellent dialogue and relatable characters. Really hot! Going to read this one to the wife and take advantage of the effects.
Oh, my god! The best story I've ever read. Even going back to "Fanny Hill" when all of this was brand new to me!
Thank You
That was an amazing story!
I only wish something like that would have happened to me.
One of the few stories I truly LOVED. Beyond being a wonderful story, beautifully told, it is the story of my live in some ways. Through school I had mostly female friends but we were always more like pals despite going out and spending a lot of time together. I don’t think we ever saw ourselves as we should have and in retrospect I know I missed several opportunities. Many years later I became friends with another young lady and finally got up the nerve to treat her not just as a friend, but as someone I wanted to love and spend my life with. I had finally learned - like Justin - to move the relationship up a notch and it changed my life. We’ve now been together over 40 years and looking forward to many more.
THIS WAS SO WELL WRITTEN WITH CARE AND PASSION . IT KEPT THE READER WANTING MORE
I was always impressed by this story that is until I realized that they were both just eighteen years old in a world where most kids were headed to college. What a life changer. A whole new world maybe this was pre9/11. Oh what a life changing experience that would be, he or she in a combat zone PTSDO, loss of a limb or just coming home and not. If you haven been then you don't understand. So FUCK OFF.
Sorry about that but I came home in 1964, and I am not home yet, I try every day but the world change while we weren't looking and they said fuck us,baby killers. So you see a lot could happen to our young couple. Let's just leave them there suspended in time,alway in love and always innocent.
I am now a pretty old man and have read very widely forever. This story is the most beautiful, most loving and truly caring story of them all. In spite of age I am as romantic and horny as I was when I first discovered such things. I had to read this in one go, couldn't wait for the end and felt sad when I did. I am happy for Samantha and Justin but I felt so inside and surrounded by the story. so real, truly amazing. I quickly knew how it would end but the journey there has been amazing. Thank you - your thoughts and feelings are beautiful.
This was absolutely amazing, this was the first time I've commented on here and it's worth it. A while back I gave up on dating because of a prior relationship, now I'm going to give it another try. Hope there's more cuz ima check! Also would love to see the ex gf reaction!
I’ve read this a few times over the years. I had a best friend in school named Samantha, whom I loved very much. The day I told her was the last time I saw or spoke to her.
This story was absolutely beautifully written and took me back to the days of my youth. Just thinking about meeting a new person in college and becoming friends with her long before we dated.
It was a beautiful experience when we began dating and it wasn’t long after we started dating that I fell in love with her . I married that lady and have never looked back. Almost 40 years now. It’s great when you find someone that fits into your life, even better when she was a friend first!
Reread lost track of how many times. But this time wow felt the pain, excitement, and angst like never before. I sure wish I could vote my five again.
Amazing first love first fuck story.
Renews my faith in love.
Think your great. James
This is incredible! I loved it. I love the way she talked and whispered to him. I wish I had that.
Well done.
This has been one of my favorite stories for a long time. I have it marked and come back to read regularly. I'd say it is close to perfect. Thank you.
Fabulous! Thank you so much. I read it to my wife over a romantic weekend. It was an aphrodisiac that led to wonderful sex & lovemaking.
I have not left many comments in all the years I have been a member. So please believe me when I say this is one of the most erotic and heartflt stories I have read. Excellent work and character development.
Great story. On a lazy Saturday I read it to my wife of 15 yrs while we stayed in bed all morning. We subsequently had great sex. Thanks!
Loved the emotion in Justin and Sammi . You did surprise me with Sammie wanting to leave towards the end, not surprisingly though you gave it a great finish !!!
Just what kind of fucking bullshit story is this?
Sam fucked around and when Justin wants it she asks a favor to not do it because she likes him and wanted a virgin.. What a fucking load of Hypocrisy?
Excellent story; among the best I've found on the site. I found the moral/ethical debates -- both Justin's internal and his hesitation about fucking his tomboy friend Samantha -- a bit too drawn out, but I don't know how 18 y.o. minds operate these days. But this is a minor quibble and a matter of taste: a pleasure to read, and I've bookmarked it, something I rarely do.
Wonderful story. This is the first of your stories I am posting a comment for , but you have written a few of my favorites. I am , officially , a fan. Thank You for all your submissions.
Great story. Very well written and the flow was perfect. Cant wait to read more of your stories.
A wonderful story...I could see it coming...wanted it to happen just the way it did...still cried when she started the ball rolling in the bedroom...can't think of a more beautiful way to begin a life-long loving relationship or a first time. He was still a bit of a jerk...maybe we all are sometimes...but she was perfect...almost too good to be true. Guess that's what makes it a wonderful fantasy.
This and adult education are the best two stories I've ever read. I hope to find more of your writing.
Simply the best - just carried me along - and to a very good place
Amazing story very similar to the way my life with my now wife began, but she was the virgin not me.
We have been married for many years now,and I still love her the same as when we first met.
I feel deceived the story tag said love and romance when in reality it's a cuckold relationship which is a big turn off for me. If you put that tag in the description, I wouldn't have read the story. I didn't make it past state page 3 and I had to stop reading it. It started out as a love story but that's what it's not. It's a fantasy of what you wish a cuckold relationship would be like
Okay, now I feel like a jerk. Disregard my comment. It was meant for another story. I clicked on the story above the story that was posted. I haven't read this story
Extraordinary! Probably the best erotic romance I have read. Please consider continuing Sammi and Justin.
Took waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too long to get to the point. You might try writing soap operas.
The Ugly Duckling turns into the beautiful swan. Sammi stuns Justin by her dramatic transformation after which she reveals her true love. Justin would be
extremely hard pressed to truly LOVE Sammi after all the emotional trauma he had been through the past months and the events leading up to that weekend.
I absolutely LOVED IT! What a wonderfully romantic love story....pace was great... Sam was the best !
Very good story, I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for taking the time to write this amazing story.
I enjoyed reading this story I only wish that it would have segwayed into a series about the two this story has already laid out the framework for it especially the way that it concluded
Is it wrong that a strong part of me wants a vignette with sammi and Justin meeting prom dress Barbie at the door the next day?
I enjoyed this story. Thank you for writing it and thank you even more for sharing it. -izzy
Really nice job. A well written story, not just because of the sex, but you really drew me into the characters and made me feel a few things too.
Lovely story... We all knew where it was going to lead to from the start, but a great build-up and climax regardless!
Can we get a follow-up of them 10 or 20 years+ into the future? I’m a sucker for happy endings and this best friends to lovers is awesome. I really want to think that they stayed faithful to each other and got married eventually and lived happily ever after.
A sweet little story, well-narrated, if perhaps a little wordy. A shame about Sam's previous implied sexual encounters that somewhat spoil her potential viginity.
Great romance story with a good build up as opposed to just another wham, bang, thank you mam story.
Some similarities to the 1987 film "Some Kind Of Wonderful" (without the sex) with Eric Stoltz as the male lead and Mary Stuart Masterson as the tomboy.