by lovecraft68
I loved this story!
The writing was outstanding; the pacing ideal; the story very, very believable.
Thank you.
I read this story before then lost contact with who the writer was. Wow but you did a great job with this one. Delightful character development. What man would not love a Samantha in his life. Going to favorite this one as well as check out the rest of the library. Thank you for your work on our behalf.
Great story!
Not my coup of tee usually, but you can grab the attention and ride the wave! 🌊 🌊
Considering even to be first story from LE to show my wife, how well is built and written.
Even so, I feel it could be better not to be so much literal in expressing "where we are heading" - in literature less is more more often than not: the dialogues (and whole" good guy " message) felt repeat way too many times.
Those repeating thoughts again and again (once as Sam's thought, second as hers talking about it, third he is thinking it, fourth his second-best friend is saying it, fourth he is saying it to Sam, fift she is repeating it to him...), that's a bit too much pushing it.
And that's happening not just once...
But again: this should be only constructive criticism for you to moving forward and getting published!
Thanks again
This was a great story. I honestly wish i had told my friend 20 years ago how i felt about her. Been friends since preschool, now in our late 30s.
Amazing Story. So so true sometimes we just don't see what is in front of our eyes.
Great story. It feels weird but sometimes I don't really get into the part of the story that's the sex. I enjoy the buildup to that point, how two (or more!) people get up to that point has so many possibilities, but there seems to be only so many ways to describe the actual sex. Yet your whole story was wonderful to read. Thank you.
This is a very well written story with a great flow. Not quite Hallmark, but I wasn't looking for that. I enjoyed the fact that Sam was true to herself and true to her best friend. While I did not have a friend like Sam at that age, I feel like I had one much later in life and we were both married and never got to find out.
Outstanding story love to read next part to this. 5 STARS without a. Doubt. Keep writing like this. You have my vote 100 percent. Semper-Fi.
Nice story I'm usually not into The Love story side of things it's not what I come here to read but at the same time I got into your story thinking it was going to be one end up being a love story kept my attention throughout which is unusual hell of a story nice ending nice to the girls you aggressive sometimes versus the guy every time just a nice story overall three thumbs up
If this was really a romance story, the guy would never have wanted to busted a nut all over the face of his 'girlfriend' because he wouldn't want to degrade her like some skank in a gonzo porn video. But, if you scratch the last few lines of this, it suddenly became a much, much, more compelling romantic story. As is, the last lines had me suddenly despising the male protagonist... outside of porn, very, very few women actually *want* a guy to do that to them. A few might put up with it, if desperate to land a guy... but... that rarely is a good recipe for a long-term love...
Although you hinted at the beginning of what was going to happen, when you did describe their first time it was lovely, sensuous and sexy. I don’t write reviews on Literotica, but couldn’t help writing that you did a wonderful job on describing the build up and climax between these two lovers. Thanks for this!
Excellent. Such a good writer! Great characters. Interesting and excellent story Development. Bravo!
Good positive romance fantasy. Liked the ending. This is what more erotica should be. Just enough explicit sex to make the ending juicy. Thanks
I liked this story. Good friends can become lovers. I know-it happened to me.
THE STORY IS VERY WELL WRITTEN AND EROTIC! hE WAS TOO FIXATED ON HER AS A FRIEND AND MISSED ALL HER EMOTIONS AND ONLY FIXATED ON HAVING SEX MISSED THE LOVE IN HER FRIENDSHIP.
THE END OF THE STORY WAS GREAT ACKNOWLEDGING THE LOVE THEY HAD FOR EACH OTHER.
THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS STORY! (5 STARS!
Very well thought out and well written. Funny how many times we fail to see what is right before us. Thankfully Samantha had the guts to get Justin to see it. BRAVO. Thank you for a terrific read.
The commenter mentioning that "we fail to see what is right before us" reminds us that love sees the world through different eyes. It may start as a physical attraction, but then there is how you deal with it. The girl here opened his emotional eyes and he was hooked by WHO she was. And it happens to the beautiful, the plain, or even the ugly. My first wife was only a few years older than the girl here when we met at college where I was the class TA. Some probably called her 'plain' but she proved my Muse, and we married right after she graduated. She (and I) went on to advanced studies, faculty, and somehow managed two children in 17 years until she died of cancer. She was very popular and used to joke she "settled" for me. I was the popular TA with lots of interested female student, but only 'saw' her after a lot of tutoring sessions, which in retrospect were probably planned by her. Much kudos to this author for capturing this dynamic.
It was a slow start, but you got your groove on and surprised me with how well you told the story. Nice job!
Outstanding story, I loved the slow build up and the way you developed the story to a perfect ending.
This is one of the first stories I’ve read on here with no negative comments as far as i could tell. I loved the story, how human they all were, and the positive ending. 10/10
A very good tale, every bit a 5 star story! Thank you !
somewhere east of Omaha
Lovecraft68, Complete story, and well written. from beginning to End . Thank You! WetSplash.
Another 5 star story. I’m always amazed at the quality of these stories. Very well done.
Bill S.
@lovecraft68, a great story and very interestingly written, absorbing in its script, rhythm and pace. It beautifully presents true friendship, which is the basis of beautiful love (I would love to experience such friendship and love myself). Lovecraft68, I bow to my feet and thank you for such a beautiful story, I am very curious about the further fate of Samantha and Justin? 👧🏻❤️🧒🏻
ps. Sorry for any errors and linguistic inaccuracies, I don't speak English.
Best regards, SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 👩🏻🦳⚧️❤️👧🏻🧒🏻
Probably the best story I have read on this site, keep up the amazing work!
That was good, needs some touch up, but a good story about missing what's right before you
The main character definitely deserved Jen, he's the same kind of asshole.
There is one thread in this story that's completely messed up imo. This entire virginity-dog-in-heat bs. His mom fucked him over and up with her baggage from her marriage. Dating girls or having casual sex while single is far different from fucking women while having a wife and kid at home. He's 18 ffs! Also, Sam had him pegged, on one hand he is all about keeping his bullshit promise and being this obnoxious I'm-waiting-for-miss-right self-righteous virgin, but otoh he is jumping around like a monkey dozed on viagra and doesn't care what he sticks his dick in as long as it's a hole.
A very nicely developed story. I can’t disagree more wholeheartedly with “Anonymous” who stated, “the main character definitely deserved Jen………”. Justin and Sammi still have much to learn about life, it is nice to imagine what some of those shared lessons’ might entail.
Liked it! I'm a sucker for true love and would love to read more of Sammi and Justin.
My ...My...MY... Thank you! This is the best story in Literotica. You got a talent, I got my wife to read it and I was rewarded with some of the hotest sex I've had in a long time!!!
Loved this story 100/10
BTW can anyone help me find a story that had a 5'8 tall girl having sex with her 6'3 tall male friend?. I can't remember the name of the story.
@Anonymous
I also remember a story like that, I think the girl was getting into a fight with bullies and then the boy, her old friend, had arrived to help her and then the two of them went to the girl's house to have intercourse with each other with the girl being the dominant one and the guy being the submissive one.
Terrific story....... and I live the romance. I had someone in my life (Kathy) that I can definitely see in this story.
That was such a great story! The characters felt so real and you could really see from their point of view. Thanks for sharing.
Great story. Really full and detailed. The characters were so real.
5 stars are not enough - there need to be tens